We are getting used to delays Coppertop.
Please have it done by Saturday. Enough people have stopped writing so far.
It would be a shame to see a creative little person like you drop out of our story.
Cobra, thank you for your wonderful addition.
It's a shame most of the comments are about the level of bloodyness instead of the wonderful dialogue. The way you are able to make the reader feel what the character feels is also very impressive.
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